Big Fish in the Front Yard | Short Story

It was a beautiful spring day at Grandma and Grandad’s house, but in the afternoon the sky over their little farm turned black. The wind and rain, that started just after supper, kept pounding the roof until after bedtime. A bright flash of lightning, followed quickly by a loud boom shook me out of bed. I ran over to the upstairs window. Even in the dark I could see it–the front yard was covered in water, rushing by like an angry river. I flew downstairs to tell Granddad.

He was standing with the front door open, looking out past the porch. “The Morgan’s Pond just down the road overflowed,” he said, matter of factly. “This happens sometimes when we get a good rain. Don’t worry. Most of it will be gone by morning. Go back to bed, son. I’ll keep an eye on it,” he said, patting me on the back.

Granddad was right. When I looked out the window the next morning, there were only a few big puddles, shimmering in the sunlight, with the green grass all flattened in the same direction. Wait, something was swimming in one of them! I could clearly see part of a fin sticking out of the shallows, with the water churning behind it. “There’s a fish in the front yard!” I yelled to my brother. “A BIG one!” We both rushed to take a closer look, flapping Granddad’s newspaper as we ran past his favorite chair.

The huge alien was still swimming in frantic half-submerged circles. “We should eat it for lunch,” my older brother suggested. “It’s a big mouth bass from the Morgan’s pond,” Granddad offered, walking up. “We need to save him!” I retorted, sounding as frenzied as the fish. Granddad ambled off without saying anything, which usually meant he had a plan.

Sure enough, he came back in a few minutes wearing his rubber boots, holding a fisherman’s net in one hand and dragging a big plastic tub with the other. It’s a good thing Grandma had gone into town to sell eggs, because she wouldn’t like what we were about to do with her laundry basket.

Granddad dipped the tub down into a puddle, filling it with a swimmable amount of water. “Lads, I’m about to wrangle a fish,” he winked. Wading in, he started chasing the beast, churning up plenty of white water himself. After a few tries, Granddad scooped up the fish and held it up triumphantly. “This is the biggest largemouth bass I’ve ever seen!” he exclaimed, finally sounding as excited as my brother and me. “We’ll put it back in Morgan’s pond,” he offered, “but only after the weigh in.” I was scratching my head now, “What’s a weigh in?” “Come along and see, boys. Help me get this tub into the back of the pick-up.” So, we loaded up the trophy fish and headed toward town.

“Simpson’s general store has a produce scale; that ought to give us a good idea,” Granddad said. “But your grandmother is also in town, and we’ll need to be quiet about it.” Inside the store, nobody questioned what was wrapped up in the old throw blanket. Come to think of it, that was Grandma’s too. I was sure hoping we didn’t get found out. “Eight pounds six ounces! yelled Granddad. “This girl weighs as much as a newborn baby!” “How do you know it’s a girl?” I questioned. “Look at that bulging belly,” he said, holding up the unwrapped fish for all to see. “She’s full of eggs.” Mr. Simpson offered to take a photo of us, but we begged off–and for good reason.

Back in the pick-up with the fish in her tub, we drove out of town, right past Grandma. Gulp! She was sitting at a table on main street with her friend Mrs. Maureen, selling eggs by the dozen. Grandma gave us a puzzled look, as Granddad stopped and rolled down the window. “We ran out of Tabasco sauce,” he explained, sheepishly. Whew, that was a close one!

We made it to Morgan’s pond with no more trouble. My brother and I unloaded the big tub with the huge fish and followed Granddad to the water. “This looks like a good spot to let her go,” he said with a grin. “Pour her back where she came from, lads.” The water was murky, but I saw her swim away. She turned back, after a few feet, and gave the three of us the side eye. “You’re welcome, girl,” I replied. “A fish deserves a fighting chance. Somebody will have to catch you with a rod and reel, like you’re supposed to.”

“Boys, it’s the same with people,” offered Granddad. “Don’t ever take advantage of someone when they’re down. Give them a sporting chance.” There was always a lesson with our Granddad, and we had lots of fun with him, too. This time we raced home to clean out the laundry tub and wash the blanket–before Grandma came back. And would you believe, Granddad had an extra bottle of Tabasco hidden in his dresser drawer?  It was still in the box.

Thank you for reading. 🙏❤️ prayers and love. For biblical parallels to this story, please see the book of Luke, chapter 15.

Note: while based on actual events, this short story is fictional.

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13 responses to “Big Fish in the Front Yard | Short Story”

  1. davidsdailydose Avatar

    Thank you, brother. The inspiration comes for a story and it flows from there. I appreciate your reading and commenting. God Bless!

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  2. The Devotional Guy™ Avatar

    I love how you’ve woven beautiful lessons into your fish tale. I’m excited to see you continue branching out as a writer, David.

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  3. davidsdailydose Avatar

    We all have feet of clay. What we need is more inter-generational collaboration. When middle aged guys, like you and me, work with younger people we wind up learning more about life and each other. Thank you for reading and commenting. God Bless!

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  4. jesusluvsall Avatar

    Grandfathers can have good life lessons at times. I like the moral to the story- do not kick someone when they are down. We should look to lift each other up.

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  5. davidsdailydose Avatar

    Thank you, Bridget. A recent flash flood left behind a flopping fish in a friend of mine’s front yard. When I heard her say, “Yesterday morning, I had a big fish in my front yard,” I knew it was a writing prompt!

    God Bless!

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  6. davidsdailydose Avatar

    Thanks, brother. I hadn’t thought about the similarities to Grandpa Walton, but it fits! God Bless! 🙏🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿🇺🇸

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  7. Alan Kearns Avatar

    What a lovely heartwarming story David. As I read it I visualised Grandpa Walton up to his antics under his ever watchful wife 😄 It is a great moral story indeed. God bless you and Nancy today 🙏 🇺🇸🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿

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  8. Pure Glory Avatar

    It is still an enjoyable read, although it was fictional. God bless you this week!

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  9. Bridget Avatar

    You have exceptional skills with writing stories, David. I was “Hooked” from the start. 😁 And I appreciate the lesson and spiritual pointers. Since I am currently reading in the book of Luke, this was great timing.

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  10. davidsdailydose Avatar

    The story is fictional, but based on actual events. I apologize if I led you to believe otherwise.
    Fact: a friend found a large fish flopping in her yard, after a flash flood yesterday.
    Fact: my oldest brother and his son once weighed a large bass on a supermarket produce scale.
    The rest of the story is fictional—entirely could have happened as told, but came out of my imagination.
    Again, I’m sorry if you were confused.
    Thank you for reading and commenting.

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  11. davidsdailydose Avatar

    The story is fictional but based on actual events. We had flash flooding here over the weekend, and a friend from church found a large fish flopping in her front yard. A farm pond nearby had overflowed its dam. The part about weighing a fish on a produce scale actually happened, too. My oldest brother and his son took a big bass into a supermarket to weigh it. Frankly, it didn’t cross my mind that anyone would think this was anything but historical/realistic fiction.
    Thanks for reading and commenting, pastor Pete.

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  12. Pure Glory Avatar

    David, enjoyed your story, with the storm, the excitement of your brother, your grandpa, and yourself. Love how you got away with using grandma’s laundry tub and blanket. What excitement putting one over on grandma! But it is amazing she never noticed the evidence, 😀

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  13. pastorpete51 Avatar

    Now that is one of the best fishy stories and tall tales I have heard in a long time!

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